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shatter by ~teaganjones:iconteaganjones:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open




You shatter through my veins
I hear your sigh
as you elongate through
that dark liquid
that is my life

Pulsate
palpitate
push

Easy now

Pump pangs with pleasure
treasure
pressure
in a
fervent
moment
Rest

The red smears all over you and if only
I had the energy
I would certainly
lick them
off
©2003-2008 ~teaganjones
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Submitted: July 5, 2003
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~nepasavaler:iconnepasavaler: Jul 5, 2003, 7:54:36 AM
i love that you didnt use the word blood. great use of aliteration (P) and the last line break is very effective.

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there will be time to murder and create


~francophones *poetic-forms ~france ~lost-souls
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